Black Ghost

Honestly, I don't have much to say about this. That is, it was very good work. ^_^ A great installment, and I loved your dialogue and use of description. One ...

7/10 Don't really get it, but it's probably just me.

*coughs*

Here are some books I found annoying/boring to death: 1) Band of Brothers ~Stephen E. Ambrose 2) Eragon ~Christopher Paolini 3) Novel Without a Name ~Huong Thu Duong 4) Gulliver's ...

To be honest...this was boring. Why? Nothing really happened. There was no conflict to speak of. And to make it worse, you have a huge infodump for a first paragraph. ...

Pure Hilarity. :lol:

Wonderful prologue. ^_^ It had all the right elements of a good hook...action, conflict, raised questions, all very good stuff. I don't say this a lot, but I do actually ...

10/10 Cinderella is awesome. ^_^

Hey! I finally got my camera to work, so I thought I'd share a few pics. ^_^ [url] [/url] This is a sorta weird family picture, with my aunt, cousin, ...

Muttering under his breath, he shook his foot irritably , seeking to get as much water off it as possible. Not needed. We know he's in a puddle, so it's ...

6/10 looks...weird.

Torturing your character isn't bad...besides, if you give him/her everything they want, then where's the conflict?

8/10 must be a nice place to live... :)

Thanks a lot, Shadowtwit. :D My diction can use a good kick sometimes. XD -Tony

8/10...Funny :lol: